Topic: As two go down...
lilangel2's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:28 AM
As Two Go Down In The Moonlight


Where the peach-fleshed sun takes its final bow

And where the curtain of darkness is drawn in awesome contrast
to the pale glow of the moon and the stars

And where the croakers and the crickets and the cicadas
lead the night in a chorus undone

And where the people and the unpeople are drawn to the water's edge
by midnight magic

Down where the curtain repeats itself betwixt the ripples of a sleeping lake

Where hands are held grippingly, and eyes drink souls, and tensions mount

In another world

Where steaming bodies and lips collide, melting inhibitions

Where an erotic gasp is heard above other normal sounds
just before silence falls...as two go down in the moonlight


Angel

jonny63's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:30 AM
Angel!!!flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

lilbity's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:31 AM
Nice !!.
makes me a bit tingley

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Sun 04/27/08 10:31 AM
:heart: Thats Georgia LOVE....yar'll...wink,wink,lol:wink:

I'll be seeing alot of that state soon,lol. GREAT WRITE..

AngelMapper's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:34 AM
Indeed very nicely done ^^

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:53 AM
drinker

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Sun 04/27/08 11:02 AM
AWSOMELY WRITTEN!!!!!flowerforyou smokin

lilangel2's photo
Sun 04/27/08 01:58 PM
Thanks everyone drinker

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Sun 04/27/08 02:06 PM
very niceflowerforyou