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Topic: Why Don't You Just Love Me Back
2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:30 AM
I was inspired to write this by a friend, it seems there are so many people here really wanting to find that one true love, but when it comes down to it, the one he or she likes doesn't like you, or vise versa.. and has even happened to me. So this poem is decated to anyone and everyone this has happened to and still might be happening to..

I look at you
you look at me
but it's not me
that you want you see

It doesn't matter how I am inside
or how hard I try
because i'm not the one
that fits your type

I have been here before
I have stood at your gate
but still you don't notice
you just walk away

Someday
in years down the road
you will think of me
and wonder why you let me go

You will think back in time
when I could have been in your life
but the person I am
just wasn't right

So you let me go
and paid me no mind
and you did it because
I wasn't your type

You may not think so now
but in the comming years
you will reflect on this
and shed a few tears

By the time you realize this
it will then be to late
because you never turned the key
and opened the gate

By Daniel
04/27/08

Everyone wants to be lovedflowerforyou



Redsoxfan1's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:32 AM
Very nice, Daniel!:heart: Very well written!flowerforyou It hit home for me!:heart:

no photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:36 AM
Very nice write. flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:36 AM
Thank you Red.. it's kinda what happens isn't it..flowerforyou :heart:

Wolfeyes58's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:37 AM
Yes Daniel...very well written. Everyone wants to be loved...and there's no better feeling than feeling it from someone that means the world to you.

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:37 AM
Thank you SKPG..flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:38 AM
Very true Robert.. thank you..

Army_Strong's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:46 AM
Very nice! Deff hit home for me.

lilbity's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:48 AM
you read my mind .
in that place at this very moment .
but its tim I walk away from that gate

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 09:52 AM
Thank you army.. yes lilbity, can't make someone like you if they don't, but I think a lot of us here should open our eyes and really take a look at what's right in front of them..

Noden's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:00 AM
Awwwh, Daniel your turn will come...smokin flowerforyou

Tommo's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:06 AM
Very well written. It is as it is written. But I was just kinda thinking, maybe put the blades down next time you go to her gate ohwell

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:08 AM
Thank you Ali...flowerforyou

Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks..laugh

Tommo's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:09 AM

Thank you Ali...flowerforyou

Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks..laugh


Nothing wrong with a healthy appetite! laugh

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:11 AM


Thank you Ali...flowerforyou

Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks..laugh


Nothing wrong with a healthy appetite! laugh


Know what you mean..drinker

Tommo's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:12 AM



Thank you Ali...flowerforyou

Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks..laugh


Nothing wrong with a healthy appetite! laugh


Know what you mean..drinker


Totally! drinker

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sun 04/27/08 10:42 AM
drinker drinker drinker

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 04/27/08 11:54 AM
Thank you MsTeddy, you see it too don't you..flowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Mon 04/28/08 09:15 AM
This is wonderful Daniel!!flowerforyou flowerforyou Been there more than once...

Funny how we were thinking alike when we wrote the other day... I'm going to go post mine and tell the story there.

Have a great day and smile!!flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Mon 04/28/08 09:18 AM
Ty. That was really neat. What a touching tribute to us all. flowerforyou

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