Topic: Why Don't You Just Love Me Back | |
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I was inspired to write this by a friend, it seems there are so many people here really wanting to find that one true love, but when it comes down to it, the one he or she likes doesn't like you, or vise versa.. and has even happened to me. So this poem is decated to anyone and everyone this has happened to and still might be happening to..
I look at you you look at me but it's not me that you want you see It doesn't matter how I am inside or how hard I try because i'm not the one that fits your type I have been here before I have stood at your gate but still you don't notice you just walk away Someday in years down the road you will think of me and wonder why you let me go You will think back in time when I could have been in your life but the person I am just wasn't right So you let me go and paid me no mind and you did it because I wasn't your type You may not think so now but in the comming years you will reflect on this and shed a few tears By the time you realize this it will then be to late because you never turned the key and opened the gate By Daniel 04/27/08 Everyone wants to be loved |
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Very nice, Daniel! Very well written! It hit home for me!
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Very nice write.
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Thank you Red.. it's kinda what happens isn't it..
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Yes Daniel...very well written. Everyone wants to be loved...and there's no better feeling than feeling it from someone that means the world to you.
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Thank you SKPG..
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Very true Robert.. thank you..
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Very nice! Deff hit home for me.
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you read my mind .
in that place at this very moment . but its tim I walk away from that gate |
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Thank you army.. yes lilbity, can't make someone like you if they don't, but I think a lot of us here should open our eyes and really take a look at what's right in front of them..
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Awwwh, Daniel your turn will come...
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Very well written. It is as it is written. But I was just kinda thinking, maybe put the blades down next time you go to her gate
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Thank you Ali...
Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks.. |
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Thank you Ali... Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks.. Nothing wrong with a healthy appetite! |
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Thank you Ali... Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks.. Nothing wrong with a healthy appetite! Know what you mean.. |
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Thank you Ali... Thank you Tommo, what these? These are just over sized chop sticks.. Nothing wrong with a healthy appetite! Know what you mean.. Totally! |
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Thank you MsTeddy, you see it too don't you..
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This is wonderful Daniel!! Been there more than once...
Funny how we were thinking alike when we wrote the other day... I'm going to go post mine and tell the story there. Have a great day and smile!! |
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Ty. That was really neat. What a touching tribute to us all.
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