Dear Sweet eyes

Your dear sweet eyes
how they tear into my dark disguise
Dear sweet eyes framed by Skin so pale
softly light by the moonlights viel
Clearing away the murky water that drowns my heart
How did I ever go so long in life, so far apart

Cold was my torment serounded my pain
The love of youre life swimming through my viens
lay to the river the sun rise it may
I left you a silent prayer on this cool winter day

Your dear sweet eyes
onto love wish I may to leave this lonely desert so dry
To walk through the cool winter day
stairing into youre dear sweet eyes I am no longer afraid
My wings once limp lift high again
I close my eyes as the worlds starts to spin
How did I ever go so far in life, so far apart
Never seeing youre eyes, with every beat of my heart

Nicholas Duncan

Im a horrible speller I think I misspelled some stuff oh whell....

It was still good thank you.

great write... doesnt matter if you dont, what matters is its coming from the heart

Meh the funny thing is most of my writing tonight has been as if I was with some one, and Im not...so its kinda wierd O-o.

Soul inspiring Love,, past present the future,,,



Very Nice

WELCOME a NEW POET..Nice write man..

spelling shmelling...who cares it's beautiful ((Angel))