Topic: Your Eyes
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Sat 04/26/08 11:11 PM
Edited by OneOfaKindGal on Sat 04/26/08 11:13 PM
2nd poem:smile:

Please dear, raise your head; I’d like to finally see your eyes
Your head is bowed low and you’re always hidden behind a disguise
Your eyes alone tell a story, a deep-rooted tale
Do confide in me, know with me you won’t fail
I will not judge you because no one is perfect
I am sorry about the abuse you had to inflict
Many times did you endure neglect and hurt
Shoved aside by all and pushed to the dirt
But I’m here for you now, no more harm and shame
No more sorrow, despair, depression and blame
I’m all ears to listen, all shoulders for you to cry
No more will you hear the sad words goodbye
Thank you for opening up your beautiful eyes
No more...
No more...
Disguise

codelockbox's photo
Sat 04/26/08 11:13 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou thank you

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Sat 04/26/08 11:14 PM
you're welcome:wink:

Off to bed nowflowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sat 04/26/08 11:14 PM
"Thank you for opening up your eyes
No more...
No more...
Disguise"


Beautiful! flowerforyou

LIJOMA's photo
Sat 04/26/08 11:15 PM
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kc0003's photo
Sat 04/26/08 11:16 PM
nice write

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Sun 04/27/08 10:12 AM
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