Topic: Presense or Pretense
sealove42's photo
Wed 04/23/08 03:46 PM
Edited by sealove42 on Wed 04/23/08 03:49 PM
When you are real, when you are true
is your presence a sound strong being or
is the pretense a mystery of you.

When you bend the ear of a friend,
or scream silently for help.
Is your presence positive or
is your pretense a dead end?

When you can't rely on yourself and
inside your working through your sytle
Is your presence helpful or
is your pretense trifle?

If by a word, or sharing an experience
can your make the world better
Is your presence always there or
is your pretense like a wind chasing a feather?

If your look deep inside each one of us
We all have a presense, a possible essence of LOVE.
Though more truer than most, you must see
We all also have a pretense, that we want people to believe.

What are you giving your presence or your pretense.
A good question to ask each day.
My pretense is missing the lies and nonsense.
My presence valuse the words that God may have to say.

If I had a pretense, she would be popular and loved
Everyone would accept her as she is and has been beloved.
My pretense is that the whole world care about eachother.
My pretense is that each sister loves each brother.

My presence is to work my pretense true.
Not just for my sake, but for the love of God to be in you.
Not ask, not to judge and for a simple sake.
My presence is to be real, never to be fake.

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MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 04/23/08 03:46 PM
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Wed 04/23/08 03:46 PM
Pretents? flowerforyou

sealove42's photo
Wed 04/23/08 03:52 PM
pretense- one not supported by facts to attempt to obtain a certain condition. I think I used it correctly, but I could be wrong.

Thanks

pretents no such word in my dictionary pretentious...

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Wed 04/23/08 03:54 PM

pretense- one not supported by facts to attempt to obtain a certain condition. I think I used it correctly, but I could be wrong.

Thanks

pretents no such word in my dictionary pretentious...


Oh...how about Pretence?

sealove42's photo
Wed 04/23/08 04:16 PM
The dictionary says I can spell it either is that OK. smile
lots of love thanks for looking out for my diction sometimes I can use all the help I can get LOL


sealove42's photo
Wed 04/23/08 04:30 PM
I like this one.....

Thanks
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sealove42's photo
Wed 04/23/08 08:25 PM
You guys sure got quiet?

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angelinboots's photo
Wed 04/23/08 08:32 PM
Liked your play on words. flowerforyou Like the way you play WITH words :wink: flowerforyou

Mystique42's photo
Wed 04/23/08 08:34 PM
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sealove42's photo
Wed 04/23/08 09:49 PM
Thanks guys goodnight..


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MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 04/23/08 10:36 PM
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Good night!