Topic: Taking back all lies | |
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In a darkened spell,I cast the magic
I'm a prayer for your exsistence In my solitary world,you're my lonliness A fantastic mission,my artistic vision Abstract sights of the minds third eye colors bleed in dreams made of angelic light I walk into the realms of the fantasy chasing down a starlit trail heaven tonight I'm taking back all lies because I need to be renewed Pull me down in the waters of repentance wash away the dreams and need of you The hours pass,I'm imprisoned within a memory Through the tiffany glass,a requiem of a dream The caress of the moonlight brings the rain again one fateful kiss would make me love you,and hold you there within I'm taking back all lies because I need to be renewed Pull me down in the waters of repentance wash away the dreams and need of you Asleep as emotions come storming through the night Awake in a fantasy where I'm blinded by the sights Like the retraction of the angels light,skies disappear this cold room is my solitary shell,a future without you is my fear I'm taking back all lies because I need to be renewed Pull me down in the waters of repentance wash away the dreams and need of you |
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ok dude...thats some pretty good writing
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That was really nice.
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JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok?
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JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok? I'm doing quite well my brother/just been busy at work..hope you are doing alright! |
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JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok? I'm doing quite well my brother/just been busy at work..hope you are doing alright! Not to bad, I know what you mean, after today I won't be online as much, I have a lot of things I have to take care of, but will check in when I am able.. glad to hear you are ok.. good to see you too.. |
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JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok? I'm doing quite well my brother/just been busy at work..hope you are doing alright! Not to bad, I know what you mean, after today I won't be online as much, I have a lot of things I have to take care of, but will check in when I am able.. glad to hear you are ok.. good to see you too.. Right back at you sir |
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Absoulutely good write!
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I would love to hear the musical arrangement this belongs with -it's always refreshing when sentiments come across this well. Loved it!
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Great write JT,,and inlightning.
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Thank you so much T and the gang
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