Topic: Taking back all lies
nightruler's photo
Tue 04/22/08 05:25 AM
In a darkened spell,I cast the magic
I'm a prayer for your exsistence
In my solitary world,you're my lonliness
A fantastic mission,my artistic vision
Abstract sights of the minds third eye
colors bleed in dreams made of angelic light
I walk into the realms of the fantasy
chasing down a starlit trail heaven tonight


I'm taking back all lies
because I need to be renewed
Pull me down in the waters of repentance
wash away the dreams and need of you



The hours pass,I'm imprisoned within a memory
Through the tiffany glass,a requiem of a dream
The caress of the moonlight brings the rain again
one fateful kiss would make me love you,and hold
you there within


I'm taking back all lies
because I need to be renewed
Pull me down in the waters of repentance
wash away the dreams and need of you



Asleep as emotions come storming through the night
Awake in a fantasy where I'm blinded by the sights
Like the retraction of the angels light,skies disappear
this cold room is my solitary shell,a future without you
is my fear


I'm taking back all lies
because I need to be renewed
Pull me down in the waters of repentance
wash away the dreams and need of you


Etrain's photo
Tue 04/22/08 05:27 AM
ok dude...thats some pretty good writing

rush2001's photo
Tue 04/22/08 06:37 AM
That was really nice.flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 04/22/08 06:57 AM
JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok?

nightruler's photo
Tue 04/22/08 07:02 AM

JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok?



I'm doing quite well my brother/just been busy at work..hope you are doing alright!

2Btrue2One's photo
Tue 04/22/08 07:04 AM


JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok?



I'm doing quite well my brother/just been busy at work..hope you are doing alright!


Not to bad, I know what you mean, after today I won't be online as much, I have a lot of things I have to take care of, but will check in when I am able.. glad to hear you are ok.. good to see you too..drinker

nightruler's photo
Tue 04/22/08 07:07 AM



JT, that was absolutely awesome.. very nice my friend.. are you ok?



I'm doing quite well my brother/just been busy at work..hope you are doing alright!


Not to bad, I know what you mean, after today I won't be online as much, I have a lot of things I have to take care of, but will check in when I am able.. glad to hear you are ok.. good to see you too..drinker



Right back at you sir

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Tue 04/22/08 07:38 AM
Absoulutely good write!
flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

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Tue 04/22/08 07:43 AM
I would love to hear the musical arrangement this belongs with -it's always refreshing when sentiments come across this well. Loved it!

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Tue 04/22/08 07:52 AM
drinker :heart: :smile: Great write JT,,and inlightning.

nightruler's photo
Tue 04/22/08 08:08 AM
Thank you so much T and the gang

nightruler's photo
Wed 04/23/08 04:02 AM
happy