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Topic: a new morning
just_mary Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 169	Mon 04/21/08 05:26 PM
on this hot muggy morning she sits sipping coffee on the stoop pride battered, hopes shattered she attempts to recoup feeling foolish, silly, and totally completely rejected an offer of assistance is given from places unexpected gratefully and thankfully offer accepted dusting the dust off her wounded pride drying the forlorn tears that have been cried she gathers her meager belongings ready to start rebuilding trying to see the sun on a new morning

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 04/21/08 05:31 PM
Not the best place to be feeling wise; yet, ohhhhhh, the opportunities abound.............

cmeasiam Joined Fri 06/08/07 Posts: 141	Mon 04/21/08 05:56 PM
Touching..I can relate to it well..

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Mon 04/21/08 06:13 PM
Wipe of the Dust,, Pride intact, Such an amazing Ray of Light,, Fill your todays and tomorrows with promises,, of Yes I can, Yes I am worthy,, Yes I am Phonemenal,, Yes I am Alive,, Yes, Yes, Yes,,,,

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/21/08 08:10 PM


Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 04/21/08 08:15 PM
Hi Mary, it's been a while. That was very nice. Sorry of the sadness, but very well written.

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