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Topic: secret places of her heart
just_mary Joined Fri 09/28/07 Posts: 169	Mon 04/21/08 05:25 PM
the secret spaces of her heart there are parts of herself she keeps bottled up within hidden on an internal shelf best to keep these hidden fears and insecurities that are to raw to share acknowledging her vulnerabilities is something she can not dare her own private little insanities that are hard enough to bare within the secret spaces of her heart

Silentrob Joined Thu 11/15/07 Posts: 1790	Mon 04/21/08 05:27 PM
the secret spaces of her heart there are parts of herself she keeps bottled up within hidden on an internal shelf best to keep these hidden fears and insecurities that are to raw to share acknowledging her vulnerabilities is something she can not dare her own private little insanities that are hard enough to bare within the secret spaces of her heart Very good Mary... Makes me want to listen to Lita Ford and Ozzie..... In fact, that's what I'm gonna do

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Mon 04/21/08 05:29 PM
As always, well done. Hello and so good to read you!

wyatt1844 Joined Sat 01/26/08 Posts: 6761	Mon 04/21/08 05:37 PM
Thanks for sharing a piece of your heart.

cmeasiam Joined Fri 06/08/07 Posts: 141	Mon 04/21/08 05:52 PM
Great write!

Dragoness Joined Wed 10/17/07 Posts: 23320	Mon 04/21/08 06:05 PM
Thanks for sharing, good perception

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Mon 04/21/08 07:19 PM
nice write.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 04/21/08 08:15 PM
Good write!

Wolfeyes58 Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 5114	Mon 04/21/08 08:17 PM
Another good one Mary. Heartfelt.

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