Topic: battered angel
babygirl13433's photo
Wed 01/24/07 11:09 AM
while sleeping one night i had a dream
it left a tale to tell
i dreamed i saw an angel
she wasnt looking well
her body was bruised and battered
her wings ripped and torn
i saw that she could bearly walk
she was tired,weary,and worn
i walked over to her and said
angel how can this be?
as she looked back and tried to smile
she said these words to me
im your guardian angel
quite a job as you can see
youve lived a very hard life
with that you must agree
youve broken laws and hearts
dont you see what youve done to me
the life youve lived so wrecklessly
ive often had to pay the bill
these bruises are from shielding you
each day i do my best still
my wings you see are ripped and torn
a noble badge i bear
so many times theyve shielded you
though you were unaware
if only you could embrace life
choose to do good on your own
it would end the pain and suffering
and know your not alone
i will always be there to watch over you
untill my stregth does fail
as for when that will be
all i can say is
only time will tell
when i awoke i thought
about my guardian angel
and how much she seemed to care
then i looked around my room
and my heart sank in despair
as i sat there thought and wondered
i said to myself
why didnt i even try
the air rushed by as if from beating wings
and i thought i heard an angel cry

LAMom's photo
Wed 01/24/07 11:17 AM
Baby, that was really Beautiful!!

babygirl13433's photo
Wed 01/24/07 11:18 AM
thank you very much

babygirl13433's photo
Wed 01/24/07 11:18 AM
thank you very much

no photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:45 PM
Very powerful words Baby...would love to see you post more

karmafury's photo
Wed 01/24/07 12:49 PM
That was just beautiful. Thank you.

michael1313's photo
Wed 01/24/07 03:54 PM
Nice Work...

keep at it New Bee!!!


that was a real good poem Babygirl13433

Cybear's photo
Thu 01/25/07 04:38 AM
WOW!That is simply fantastic baby~gurl.You will have the attention of
all the JSH poets within.I LUV this poem.Very powerful indeed,please
keep them coming.Godspeed!Cybear. :wink:

venusrose's photo
Thu 01/25/07 05:54 AM
I loved this one, Babygirl. Absolutely beautiful! Thanks for sharing.
Angel Blessings to you!