Topic: CSIGirl,fuzzylovesongrequest/I couldnt forget you if i tried
nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:01 PM
Chances are,I'll never hold you
so I guess we'll just fantasize
If one night our dreams shall collide
Girl,you'll have me in your arms

I have peered through my bedroom window
Rain falls down into my life
Love was something that I could never understand
Elizabeth,I couldn't forget you if I tried

Look at us now,just trying to find the pieces
if ever our hearts will be the same,the scars remain
zero to 60 in a heartbeat,my thoughts will race tonight
after all that i have been through,I need you in my life


Believe me if I could bridge this distance
every word I write would be felt in our embrace
Though I've never met you,I'll never forget you
Hopefully we'll have one day,more than just a dream to chase

msdestinbooty's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:04 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

Elizabeth1968's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:08 PM
Marry me! I give you two really hard poems to write and all I can say is boy...you better marry me!

nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:10 PM

Marry me! I give you two really hard poems to write and all I can say is boy...you better marry me!



lol.you nutflowerforyou

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:12 PM
Look JT you got her fallin at your feet!

Nice write hon!flowerforyou flowerforyou

Elizabeth1968's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:13 PM
I ain't kidding!!!...lolsmooched

nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:18 PM
yeah you are

Elizabeth1968's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:25 PM
No I'm Not!:wink:

nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:36 PM

No I'm Not!:wink:




right

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:37 PM
snatch him up girl he's a goodun!flowerforyou flowerforyou

Elizabeth1968's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:44 PM
snatch him up girl he's a goodun!flowerforyou

I know but he doesn't believe me!...lol

lurchs_sister's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:44 PM
you would have to move to NY he would never leave his little ones

nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 06:53 PM
thats it..I'm calling Elton John/I've got his next hit ready

Elizabeth1968's photo
Thu 04/17/08 07:05 PM

you would have to move to NY he would never leave his little ones


I have two myself, but I'm a great at solving problems...it's all just details and details can always be figured out.flowerforyou

hikerchick's photo
Thu 04/17/08 07:08 PM
I wanted to comment on your poem- I hope I'm not interrupting anything ...it brought a tear to my eye..of course I substituted another name for "Elizabeth"..and mine won't ever have a happy ending..but I felt what you wrote.

nightruler's photo
Thu 04/17/08 07:14 PM

I wanted to comment on your poem- I hope I'm not interrupting anything ...it brought a tear to my eye..of course I substituted another name for "Elizabeth"..and mine won't ever have a happy ending..but I felt what you wrote.



Well I'm glad you liked it,and that it grabbed you the way it did/My whole purpose of being a musician/writer is for people like us who seem to have a few more trials and tribulations than others...so thank you!

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Fri 04/18/08 04:41 AM
drinker flowerforyou drinker