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Edited by
ShyKBear
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Thu 04/17/08 12:28 AM
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If I died tomorrow
my heart would go with you my soul would carry over to the vast oceans of blue If I died tomorrow you would see me in your dreams I know you'd wish I was with you to mend all the broken seams If I died tomorrow I would not want you to mourn too long for this is what would be planned for me And I would wish you to stay strong So if I died tomorrow don't hold your feelings all inside and please go on with the life you have like you would if I was still alive. |
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Nice
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Very sweet words,,,thank for sharing |
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Edited by
Spaceman2008
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Thu 04/17/08 12:27 AM
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Wow....babe, thats, just...man....powerful....
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Thank you...thank you!
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thats really good
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Beautiful, powerful and evocative words - so sentimental. Tears in eyes - but of course I cannot admit that, can I?
Thanks for sharing. |
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oh nice
good to see you around |
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Such a wonderful heart felt poem shykBear.. it shows your heart of gold.. thank you for sharing..
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I figured instead of posting a new one; I'll just add to this one.
A man to hold me close A man to hold me tight keep me cuddled in his arms on cold Arizona nights A man to call me sweetie A man to romance for me not a man who's insecure one who loves unconditionally A man that never gives up trying A man who's ready to commit Someone who will never say Was it really worth it? This man's heart is pure and tender His soul is running free never do I have to wonder where he is Because I know he's coming home to me. He's my prize to have the soul I want to share the spirit of his happiness and knowing he truly does care. |
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I’m the man for you babe!
It’s a shame that we’re separated by such a vast temporal ocean. I love your thoughts. Everything you write is precisely who I’m searching for. But alas that temporal ocean is more than we can swim. I sincerely hope you find him! He’ll be the luckiest man on earth. |
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I like it...
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I figured instead of posting a new one; I'll just add to this one. A man to hold me close A man to hold me tight keep me cuddled in his arms on cold Arizona nights A man to call me sweetie A man to romance for me not a man who's insecure one who loves unconditionally A man that never gives up trying A man who's ready to commit Someone who will never say Was it really worth it? This man's heart is pure and tender His soul is running free never do I have to wonder where he is Because I know he's coming home to me. He's my prize to have the soul I want to share the spirit of his happiness and knowing he truly does care. I hope you don't mind me USING THIS,,for YOU. A woman to hold me close A woman to hold me tight keep me cuddled in her arms on cold INDIANA nights A woman to call me sweetie A woman to romance for me not a woman who's insecure one who loves unconditionally A woman that never gives up trying A woman who's ready to commit Someone who will never say Was it really worth it? This woman's heart is pure and tender Her soul is running free never do I have to wonder where she is Because I know she's coming home to me. She's my prize to have the soul I want to share the spirit of her happiness and knowing she truly does care. I believe WE feel the same way,,,,just LIVE in another PLACE.. Yours is a BEAUTIFUL POEM...... |
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I believe WE feel the same way,,,,just LIVE in another PLACE.. Hey bud,.... I was here first. |
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Edited by
ShyKBear
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Thu 04/17/08 06:52 PM
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I believe WE feel the same way,,,,just LIVE in another PLACE.. Hey bud,.... I was here first. Now...now let not fight over me My heart is here for all to see, the beauty inside the writing is me! |
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