Topic: metaphor of an angel
jimz's photo
Wed 04/16/08 12:59 PM
Edited by jimz on Wed 04/16/08 01:05 PM
my faith in her
back and forth
between her wings
breaking
on the
pavement
and back up
to heaven

when she
prays
for my
sacrifice

the hands
in my
spinning
clock
wind
down

she asks
for my
birth

coins
roll
under
my stoned
earth
until
the ground
is bare
until
a ghost
wandering
in my
angel
possesses
my eyes

her words
a magnetic
wind
pulling me
to the walls
of mirrors
where I run
into myself
not knowing
who paid
for her
rain
to wash
my bloood
on the clothes
of my fingered
soul

she takes
items
from my
soul
and dissolves
them
to move
eternity
under her
three moons

one shines
a light
yet
it is too much
light
the stone letters
of my madness
are thrown
at her head
while she gives
a little
bloood
for
repentence

the second
moon
is behind
my mind
where light
shines
to the outside
life
this makes
the statue
in me
move

the third
moon
turns into
a sun
as I try
to hide
in my
solitary
confinement
but as soon
as she swallows
me
in her swinging
cage
the doors
open
and the world
sees me
hanging too close
to a divine
woman
and their
mockery
only shuns
their
rodent
mentality
but there are
so many teeth
in man
biting god
so his bloood
she drinks
and pours
over
my eyes

I look
at a cloud
shaped
like wings

I jump in
until my
skin
is stolen








MirrorMirror's photo
Wed 04/16/08 01:01 PM
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kc0003's photo
Wed 04/16/08 01:04 PM
nicely done jim

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pilgrimandpagan's photo
Wed 04/16/08 01:05 PM
wow spiffy:smile:

lurchs_sister's photo
Wed 04/16/08 01:17 PM
The imagery you give is amazing!

Jimmy... YOU ARE WORTHY!flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Wed 04/16/08 02:51 PM
:heart: Jimmy
You know my thoughts so I leave you with flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 04/16/08 05:16 PM
Wow (((jimmy))) flowerforyou