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Topic: Rain
Angelface2000 Joined Mon 03/10/08 Posts: 1930	Wed 04/16/08 09:58 AM
I knew our goodbye kiss wasn't goodbye forever because even though it was raining the sunlight still shone through I knew you were my angel because I could see your wings reflect in the raindroplets and I knew you loved me too because I could taste it in your tears

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Wed 04/16/08 09:59 AM


Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Wed 04/16/08 09:59 AM
Oooo, good job; bittersweet!

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Wed 04/16/08 11:45 AM
softly, bitterly, sweet nice write angel

7Kate7 Joined Wed 03/05/08 Posts: 195	Wed 04/16/08 02:45 PM
Wonderful!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 04/16/08 02:54 PM
I knew our goodbye kiss wasn't goodbye forever because even though it was raining the sunlight still shone through I knew you were my angel because I could see your wings reflect in the raindroplets and I knew you loved me too because I could taste it in your tears Beautiful

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 04/16/08 05:21 PM

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