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Topic: You Win
hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 04:39 PM
You win the fight to squelch my spirit I tried to explain; you wouldn't hear it I am tired and beaten, I hope you are pleased My heart feels tender, my soul feels diseased Each thing that I say only serves to incite you I came to have fun; I don't want to fight you I thought you enjoyed my irreverent style I thought my wit charmed you, if just for a while I try to be loyal, and funny, and kind But it seems that some of you can read my mind You know what I mean, when it's not what I say And I am left clueless and fading away So spank me and shush me and tell me I'm wrong If it helps you to feel that you are so strong You control me, you're winning, you must be so proud No longer will I share my feelings aloud

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sat 04/12/08 04:39 PM


Flirtyvirgo Joined Tue 12/11/07 Posts: 1937	Sat 04/12/08 04:40 PM
Very nice

brian325 Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 4132	Sat 04/12/08 04:40 PM
(((((((((( hiker ))))))))))))))))

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/12/08 04:40 PM
Wow,,, Nice very nice

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 04:42 PM
You guys are unbelievably kind. You really never know the impact that you can have on someone's life..you have all given me so much.

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/12/08 04:43 PM
You guys are unbelievably kind. You really never know the impact that you can have on someone's life..you have all given me so much. You keep writing sweetie,, and I'll show up,, your words speak louder than you may know

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sat 04/12/08 04:46 PM
Hopefully, this poem was a vent and the depictions of soul not actually spent. If they cannot handle your words, the choice to not read what you write, not absurd. But just because some are silly and wimpy, Don't hold back your thoughts, don't let your style be crimpied. Say what you think, be it real or in jest. Let it flow through your fingers for you do you best.................

cmeasiam Joined Fri 06/08/07 Posts: 141	Sat 04/12/08 04:54 PM
Been there, spoke and wrote the same thing, but not nearly as well as you have.

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Sat 04/12/08 04:55 PM
You win the fight to squelch my spirit I tried to explain; you wouldn't hear it I am tired and beaten, I hope you are pleased My heart feels tender, my soul feels diseased Each thing that I say only serves to incite you I came to have fun; I don't want to fight you I thought you enjoyed my irreverent style I thought my wit charmed you, if just for a while I try to be loyal, and funny, and kind But it seems that some of you can read my mind You know what I mean, when it's not what I say And I am left clueless and fading away So spank me and shush me and tell me I'm wrong If it helps you to feel that you are so strong You control me, you're winning, you must be so proud No longer will I share my feelings aloud No one should control another, if that happens then it is you who have given them permission to abuse your integrity, take control, you are your own boss and no one owns you..............Just don't let them !!!

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 04:59 PM
No one should control another, if that happens then it is you who have given them permission to abuse your integrity, take control, you are your own boss and no one owns you..............Just don't let them !!! It is just an illusion of control..you are right. Sometimes you have to go along to get along.

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 05:00 PM
Hopefully, this poem was a vent and the depictions of soul not actually spent. If they cannot handle your words, the choice to not read what you write, not absurd. But just because some are silly and wimpy, Don't hold back your thoughts, don't let your style be crimpied. Say what you think, be it real or in jest. Let it flow through your fingers for you do you best................. I will not crimpie my style for anyone!!! Thank You!! I love this.

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 05:00 PM
Been there, spoke and wrote the same thing, but not nearly as well as you have. you are too kind.

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sat 04/12/08 05:02 PM
Hmmmm must ponder that go along to get along theory. Sometimes, my jaws ache from keeping my mouth shut and other times, well I seriously don't think barbed wire is strong enough to keep 'em together and me quiet. Guess ya just have to pick your battles. Good luck with it.......

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Sat 04/12/08 05:04 PM
Nothing like posting at the same time. Glad you liked it and you have the same um, well hell gumption!!!!

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 05:09 PM
Hmmmm must ponder that go along to get along theory. Sometimes, my jaws ache from keeping my mouth shut and other times, well I seriously don't think barbed wire is strong enough to keep 'em together and me quiet. Guess ya just have to pick your battles. Good luck with it....... well, it's either that or lose something that has provided hours of entertainment for me....not sure if I am capable of doing what is required though..and suspect that at some point it will become not worth it. But there is so much I value, too. It's a dilemmna. And the choice may be taken from me at any time.

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Sat 04/12/08 05:19 PM
Hmmmm must ponder that go along to get along theory. Sometimes, my jaws ache from keeping my mouth shut and other times, well I seriously don't think barbed wire is strong enough to keep 'em together and me quiet. Guess ya just have to pick your battles. Good luck with it....... well, it's either that or lose something that has provided hours of entertainment for me....not sure if I am capable of doing what is required though..and suspect that at some point it will become not worth it. But there is so much I value, too. It's a dilemmna. And the choice may be taken from me at any time. How so? Never make yourself a prisoner when the door is wide open, throwing in the towel is not an option. Why do you let others tell you what to do ? Are you a woman, can you roar? Most of the girls on this site do...........Go on, ask them !

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 05:45 PM
Hmmmm must ponder that go along to get along theory. Sometimes, my jaws ache from keeping my mouth shut and other times, well I seriously don't think barbed wire is strong enough to keep 'em together and me quiet. Guess ya just have to pick your battles. Good luck with it....... well, it's either that or lose something that has provided hours of entertainment for me....not sure if I am capable of doing what is required though..and suspect that at some point it will become not worth it. But there is so much I value, too. It's a dilemmna. And the choice may be taken from me at any time. How so? Never make yourself a prisoner when the door is wide open, throwing in the towel is not an option. Why do you let others tell you what to do ? Are you a woman, can you roar? Most of the girls on this site do...........Go on, ask them ! It is clearly my choice to do so..because they have control of something that I want. It's that simple.

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Sat 04/12/08 05:46 PM
Anyway, every time I roar I lose more. You see? It's a dilemmna.

BonnyMiss Joined Thu 05/10/07 Posts: 15342	Sat 04/12/08 05:49 PM
Hmmmm must ponder that go along to get along theory. Sometimes, my jaws ache from keeping my mouth shut and other times, well I seriously don't think barbed wire is strong enough to keep 'em together and me quiet. Guess ya just have to pick your battles. Good luck with it....... well, it's either that or lose something that has provided hours of entertainment for me....not sure if I am capable of doing what is required though..and suspect that at some point it will become not worth it. But there is so much I value, too. It's a dilemmna. And the choice may be taken from me at any time. How so? Never make yourself a prisoner when the door is wide open, throwing in the towel is not an option. Why do you let others tell you what to do ? Are you a woman, can you roar? Most of the girls on this site do...........Go on, ask them ! It is clearly my choice to do so..because they have control of something that I want. It's that simple. I'm puzzled here, or am I slow? We are all on line what can you possibly have for someone over the internet,certainly not a material gain I take it.