Topic: ONE H3LL OF A FALL (POEM)
sleepin_time's photo
Mon 04/07/08 04:55 AM
ive talked to you

ive fell for you

even though ive never seen you before

im missing you

and it scares me

how bout you and why do you

have to live so far away

cause i wanna get to know everything about you

how you think

and even brush your hair

i promiss i wont hurt you in any way

cause i wanna be with you

so why dont you come and be with me

if only for a day

so what do i have to prove

when i say dont worry about me bein true

cause i want to get to know everything you

how you think

and even how you brush your hair

i hope your happy

with who ever you deem worthy

cause right now you live too far away

we're both in a deadlock

and i hate it this way

cause i want to get to know everything you

how you think

and even brush your hair

i think your beutiful

so im gonna leave but

just one more thing

i wanna know everything about you

how you think

and even brush your hair

intill then ill dream about you

cause ive fallen and

it scares me

ill just wait till the day

when you can stand beside me

zanne46's photo
Mon 04/07/08 05:15 AM
very nice poem...

she, who ever she may be, one day,will be a lucky girl...

:smile: flowerforyou

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Mon 04/07/08 05:27 AM
This is an excellent write filled w/longing,pain & desire.Keep writing btw.Godspeed!Cydrinker glasses

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 04/07/08 06:24 AM
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou
Nice write!

LAMom's photo
Mon 04/07/08 08:05 AM
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