Topic: Something Special
Fadedspirit's photo
Sun 04/06/08 09:54 PM
Something Special

Into the darkness,
Beyond the murky depths of pain,
Reaching out your gentle hand,
You kept me warm and safe.

Though you never really saw me,
You felt my soul at least,
So weak and very fragile,
I thought I'd die in peace.

The gentle words you gave
Were just whispers on the wind,
Never had I thought
They'd come back and try to win.

You never saw my tears,
For those wells have long ran dry.
I heard you weeping in the darkness
Though I wondered why.

You stirred the stuff inside me
As I tried to force you go....
And here I sit and wonder
Why now emotions flow.

You cracked the very stone
I made to hold my heart,
And never would you stop,
Until it fell apart.

You walked right through the illusions
And deceptions formed without.
You never gave a chance
To give freedom to my doubt.

You never heard my lies
As you made me face your truth,
Though freely I could go,
My freedom wasn't true.

You opened up the windows
And kissed the blindness from my eyes
Forcing me to see
What lies within the light.

You said you weren't an angel
Yet I know without a doubt,
You're something very special
I could never live without.

Fadedspirit 4/6/2008

Winx's photo
Sun 04/06/08 10:03 PM
flowerforyou

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Sun 04/06/08 10:10 PM
nice faded

S

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Sun 04/06/08 10:12 PM
:heart: drinker I say GRAB her, and NEVER let HER,,,GO..GOOD READ.drinker drinker :heart: And GOOD LUCK...:wink:

shauna22's photo
Mon 04/07/08 01:35 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou x

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Mon 04/07/08 06:12 AM
Very beautiful write!

(((Fade))) flowerforyou drinker flowerforyou

What T said! :wink:

Differentkindofwench's photo
Mon 04/07/08 07:23 AM
nice flow Faded, she's a smart one I'm thinkin..........

LAMom's photo
Mon 04/07/08 08:03 AM
(((( Faded )))))

Beautiful simply Incredible,,, flowerforyou flowerforyou

Fadedspirit's photo
Mon 04/07/08 11:13 PM
Thanks winx. :smile:

Thanks meandu2, glad you liked it. :smile:

Thanks iam4u, If I grabbed her, she'd whack me upside the head....lol.

Awww, thanks shauna.:smile: flowerforyou

:smile: Thanks MsTeddyBear. :smile:

Thanks dkw! lol either that or I'm being played as a fool.

Aww, thanks LAMom. blushing :smile: