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Something Special
Into the darkness, Beyond the murky depths of pain, Reaching out your gentle hand, You kept me warm and safe. Though you never really saw me, You felt my soul at least, So weak and very fragile, I thought I'd die in peace. The gentle words you gave Were just whispers on the wind, Never had I thought They'd come back and try to win. You never saw my tears, For those wells have long ran dry. I heard you weeping in the darkness Though I wondered why. You stirred the stuff inside me As I tried to force you go.... And here I sit and wonder Why now emotions flow. You cracked the very stone I made to hold my heart, And never would you stop, Until it fell apart. You walked right through the illusions And deceptions formed without. You never gave a chance To give freedom to my doubt. You never heard my lies As you made me face your truth, Though freely I could go, My freedom wasn't true. You opened up the windows And kissed the blindness from my eyes Forcing me to see What lies within the light. You said you weren't an angel Yet I know without a doubt, You're something very special I could never live without. Fadedspirit 4/6/2008 |
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nice faded
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Very beautiful write!
(((Fade))) ![]() ![]() ![]() What T said! ![]() |
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nice flow Faded, she's a smart one I'm thinkin..........
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(((( Faded )))))
Beautiful simply Incredible,,, ![]() ![]() |
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Thanks winx.
![]() Thanks meandu2, glad you liked it. ![]() Thanks iam4u, If I grabbed her, she'd whack me upside the head....lol. Awww, thanks shauna. ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() Thanks dkw! lol either that or I'm being played as a fool. Aww, thanks LAMom. ![]() ![]() |
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