Topic: I cant sleep:(
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Sun 04/06/08 12:38 AM

Convincing gaze falls upon the ice that has frozen over the heart that beats inside my chest. Refreshing the thirst that has led me to dehydration for such a long time. Suffocating every breath that escapes from the lungs that could collapse at any time. Tempting my lips to test the sweet breath that exits your inner thoughts. daring you to say what you really feel and although my thoughts are endless through the night, I lie awake hoping that within each day ahead..Time will grow with the ease of simple songs inside my head within my world thats grown so cold. For now all I have is a pillow to hold.


NineTailFox's photo
Sun 04/06/08 12:39 AM
Hi flowerforyou :heart:

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Sun 04/06/08 12:40 AM
another well written one
nice work

flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sun 04/06/08 12:40 AM
that makes 2 of us

darkowl1's photo
Sun 04/06/08 12:42 AM
god... you're gonna make people cry...very nice again,, that's too lonely, just like most on here, best work comes from harder times... good times aren't as dramatic....that's why... shame isn't it?

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Sun 04/06/08 12:47 AM

as the wind whipped horizontal rain through the broken trees that looked like claws grasping though deep charred colored rivers, the lone figure defied the onslaught... slowly, and deliberately he came as floating on his own fog, his malevolence moved him on. toward us he came....gliding through the broken stalks of corn from the previous year, dried and withered as he was, for he was........

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Sun 04/06/08 11:18 AM
drinker