Topic: The Candle ( Den's Challenge)
BonnyMiss's photo
Sat 04/05/08 12:58 PM
I watched intently as the wax slowly flowed from the candle
The flickering flame melted my memories upon the mantle
I prayed the flame would not go out taking all that I cherish
Love, life,laughter and all things good and rich
In the flame I see the smile that touched my heart
Fond recollections of events in the distant past
Shadows of a time once glorious played upon the wall
Alone,I sit, waiting to answer to your call
Our candle held so much hope,sweet serenity in a world turning way too fast
Can time stand still, Allowing the candle's flame to last?
But now the slowly melting wax signals the end
Of hopes and dreams, no more can I pretend
It has been a journey for you and I
The time has come to say a sad goodbye
I place the keys to the door upon the mantle
And take one last look at the melted candle.

05.04.08






msdestinbooty's photo
Sat 04/05/08 01:00 PM
happy really pretty

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 04/05/08 01:05 PM
Moving- very moving!
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(((Bonny)))

BonnyMiss's photo
Sat 04/05/08 01:11 PM
Hey MsTeddy,how are you ? Hope your week-end is going well.

msdestinybooty,thank you,welcome to the poet's sanctuary, now where is yours? bigsmile

LAMom's photo
Sat 04/05/08 01:24 PM
:heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:

Sitngrin's photo
Sat 04/05/08 01:27 PM
I like, I love it, I want some more of it!!

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~Den

no photo
Sat 04/05/08 02:08 PM
drinker drinker drinker flowerforyou REAL NICE, Miss Bonny, flowerforyou :heart: drinker bigsmile

s1owhand's photo
Sat 04/05/08 04:27 PM
:heart:

kc0003's photo
Sat 04/05/08 04:51 PM
oh very nice miss bonny
as always

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