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Topic: Missed Opportunities
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Sat 04/05/08 11:54 AM
His eyes are haunted
Lost
And purple deep bruised
By the cage he’s locked
himself in unwillingly
He stares off into space
His only escape
From a young life bogged down
And buried
Under responsibilities
He’s far too young to shoulder ….
Reaching out I ask gently
“Son, are you happy?
Is this really what you want?
My pride
My joy
My darling boy?
I’ve watched you in silence
Suffering
Your sweet face older
Than the years you wear
Your face no longer heightened
With joy
Do you ever get lonely?
Do you just want to run and
leave behind all
which is tying you down?
And he looks down sorrowfully
Broken down in despair
And whispers ever so quietly
in my motherly ear
“Well……there was a girl….”

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 04/05/08 11:56 AM
flowerforyou Awwwwwwwww flowerforyou
Nice Motherly write!

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Sat 04/05/08 11:59 AM

flowerforyou Awwwwwwwww flowerforyou
Nice Motherly write!


Thank you Teddy...how are you this morning my sweet one? :heart: flowerforyou

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Sat 04/05/08 11:59 AM
Your a machine! It's inspiring to see people writing so muchbigsmile

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Sat 04/05/08 12:02 PM

Your a machine! It's inspiring to see people writing so muchbigsmile


No I'm not a machine, I'm an insomniac *smile*...I wish I WAS a machine, then I could turn me off for a bit....laugh :heart:

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Sat 04/05/08 12:04 PM
Doing good! Been writting like crazy this morning... laugh

Hope your weekend is going well! :heart: flowerforyou

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Sat 04/05/08 12:06 PM

Doing good! Been writting like crazy this morning... laugh

Hope your weekend is going well! :heart: flowerforyou


Yes it is. A quiet morning with my deepest love. My son.

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Sat 04/05/08 12:06 PM
Having this torment but
knowing your with me
showing your care, Mother
I feel your love, everywhere.

Another GREAT write.....flowerforyou :heart: drinker

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Sat 04/05/08 12:07 PM

Having this torment but
knowing your with me
showing your care, Mother
I feel your love, everywhere.

Another GREAT write.....flowerforyou :heart: drinker


Thank you sweetheart~how are you this lovely Saturday my friend?? :heart:

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Sat 04/05/08 12:08 PM


Your a machine! It's inspiring to see people writing so muchbigsmile


No I'm not a machine, I'm an insomniac *smile*...I wish I WAS a machine, then I could turn me off for a bit....laugh :heart:


Yeah, I've been there. Though I do enjoy being up into the wee hours. Maybe a little too much ohwell

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Sat 04/05/08 12:12 PM
flowerforyou

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Sat 04/05/08 12:16 PM
i liked that one wiz

“Well……there was a girl….”
she was like no other
till she disappeared
under the nights cover...

flowerforyou

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Sat 04/05/08 12:22 PM



Your a machine! It's inspiring to see people writing so muchbigsmile


No I'm not a machine, I'm an insomniac *smile*...I wish I WAS a machine, then I could turn me off for a bit....laugh :heart:


Yeah, I've been there. Though I do enjoy being up into the wee hours. Maybe a little too much ohwell



<<----looks like a racoon...

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Sat 04/05/08 12:22 PM

flowerforyou



:heart:

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Sat 04/05/08 12:22 PM

i liked that one wiz

“Well……there was a girl….”
she was like no other
till she disappeared
under the nights cover...

flowerforyou


kc that was lovely....:heart:

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Sat 04/05/08 12:47 PM
Touching...flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Sat 04/05/08 10:19 PM

Touching...flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou


Jamie! Damn sugar, you look BEAUTIFUL in that picture!!!! That's my pretty girl! MUUUUAH!! :heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

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Sat 04/05/08 10:33 PM
indifferent Feeling like this guy looks,lolindifferent
but fine really, just empty of thoughts at the moment.
Looking deep to feel my mind..
And I hope you are great in every way... Your writing is.:smile: :heart: flowerforyou drinker

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Sat 04/05/08 10:36 PM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh my have you seen my thoughts lately,,, Wow,, kinda a moment of reflection for me,,,

As always,, I send my Love

:heart: :heart:

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Sat 04/05/08 10:46 PM

indifferent Feeling like this guy looks,lolindifferent
but fine really, just empty of thoughts at the moment.
Looking deep to feel my mind..
And I hope you are great in every way... Your writing is.:smile: :heart: flowerforyou drinker


iam you always make me feel so good about my writing! Thank you sweetie!!!! :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

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