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Topic: Square Peg
lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 08:40 AM
Here I sit All alone My pride again Has come and gone Never knowing Why I try I just want to Sit and cry I feel my heart Being torn in two I know deep loss I'm missing you I have seen you In my mind's eye I follow you At least I try I've not been broken I am not beat But my heart feels So incomplete Told myself I'll never beg Would be like a round hole And a square peg I wait and wait Yet here I sit It's a promise I'll never quit I'm feeling like Another pawn Here today Tomorrow gone I am hoping In the grander scheme I can wake up And have my dream

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Sat 04/05/08 08:42 AM
Ouuuuuuuuuu Really Good Write!!!

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 08:48 AM
((((Susan))))

zanne46 Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5610	Sat 04/05/08 09:27 AM
Semper FI Sister

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 09:29 AM
OOH RAH!! Zanne... Love ya Sis!

Noden Joined Mon 06/11/07 Posts: 5050	Sat 04/05/08 09:30 AM
MMMMMMMMMMMMMM, I hear ya sis and hold on to that thought, it just might one day be true... nice write...

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 09:32 AM
((((Noden)))) What would life be without dreams!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 01:46 PM
Dream the Incredible Dream,, Yes they really do come true

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Sat 04/05/08 01:47 PM
Yes, I'm here. What were your other two wishes? :P Great write!! ~D

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 03:54 PM
Dream the Incredible Dream,, Yes they really do come true Of course they do I have you as a friend!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 03:56 PM
Dream the Incredible Dream,, Yes they really do come true Of course they do I have you as a friend! Blessings in life, brought me you,, Hand in Hand we walk Angel,,

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 03:56 PM
Yes, I'm here. What were your other two wishes? :P Great write!! ~D Now that you're here Den I gues sI need to ask the other two wishes 1. A poem about sex and soda pop 2. A night out on the town with all my friends here!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sat 04/05/08 03:58 PM
Yes, I'm here. What were your other two wishes? :P Great write!! ~D Now that you're here Den I gues sI need to ask the other two wishes 1. A poem about sex and soda pop 2. A night out on the town with all my friends here! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I wait in anticipation for that poem... <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< tapping the Nails,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh Den where are you,,, As for the night out,,, I will be the first one there

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 04:01 PM
Yes, I'm here. What were your other two wishes? :P Great write!! ~D Now that you're here Den I gues sI need to ask the other two wishes 1. A poem about sex and soda pop 2. A night out on the town with all my friends here! Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I wait in anticipation for that poem... <<<<<<<<<<<<<<<<< tapping the Nails,, Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh Den where are you,,, As for the night out,,, I will be the first one there See what he started?! The night out is going to be by his design also so I can't wait!

Sitngrin Joined Tue 01/15/08 Posts: 1078	Sat 04/05/08 04:57 PM
Oh Lord. Ok gimme a few, gonna be a few on these 2 with the other one I have on the list. LOL, I'll post on the main thread

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 04:59 PM
Oh Lord. Ok gimme a few, gonna be a few on these 2 with the other one I have on the list. LOL, I'll post on the main thread Patiently waiting Den!

nightruler Joined Fri 10/05/07 Posts: 653	Sat 04/05/08 05:55 PM
Life's a garden Vic,dig it. Nice write

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Sat 04/05/08 05:57 PM
Life's a garden Vic,dig it. Nice write All comin up roses with you aroung JT!!