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MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 04/03/08 10:59 PM
Warm sun bronzed silk blowing wildly in tune with a faintly sea scented breeze ... Dancing impatiently cautiously eager … She’s unable to remain still as she lifts green eyed curiosity up to the sky quietly wondering Just what lies over The hill…

Max_Darkling Joined Sat 03/29/08 Posts: 1166	Thu 04/03/08 11:03 PM
cool

dodger1953 Joined Wed 03/19/08 Posts: 590	Thu 04/03/08 11:03 PM
u have a nice profile ms wizard!

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 04/03/08 11:04 PM
A fine tanned body of the man to take your hand. Nice thoughts a mist the the sandy beach.

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 04/03/08 11:05 PM
cool Hi darkling...

Jaden11 Joined Tue 04/01/08 Posts: 105	Thu 04/03/08 11:05 PM
I love it! It starts out descriptive, verbose, and subtle and then ends short, sweet, and to the point. I love the imagery and the message. Good job

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 04/03/08 11:05 PM
u have a nice profile ms wizard! Thank you dodger!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 04/03/08 11:05 PM
A fine tanned body of the man to take your hand. Nice thoughts a mist the the sandy beach. Lovely!!!

jonny63 Joined Sat 03/08/08 Posts: 5229	Thu 04/03/08 11:06 PM


MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 04/03/08 11:06 PM
I love it! It starts out descriptive, verbose, and subtle and then ends short, sweet, and to the point. I love the imagery and the message. Good job Thank you Jaden! I liked this one alot myself...

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Thu 04/03/08 11:06 PM


MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Fri 04/04/08 05:59 AM
Ummmmmmmm this one leaves you to imagine over the hill... Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee. (((MsWizard)))

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Fri 04/04/08 06:04 AM
Though I know it's not what you were speaking of in my mind's eye i could see a tree reaching for the sun and wondering what's over that hill next to her... Beautiful...

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Fri 04/04/08 06:05 AM
Warm sun bronzed silk blowing wildly in tune with a faintly sea scented breeze ... Dancing impatiently cautiously eager … She’s unable to remain still as she lifts green eyed curiosity up to the sky quietly wondering Just what lies over The hill… you capture a moment like no other

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 04/04/08 08:36 AM
Ummmmmmmm this one leaves you to imagine over the hill... Niceeeeeeeeeeeeeee. (((MsWizard))) Thank you my Teddy ((((())))))))

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 04/04/08 08:37 AM
Though I know it's not what you were speaking of in my mind's eye i could see a tree reaching for the sun and wondering what's over that hill next to her... Beautiful... It could very well be what I was speaking of...its all a matter of perception darlin!

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 04/04/08 08:37 AM
Warm sun bronzed silk blowing wildly in tune with a faintly sea scented breeze ... Dancing impatiently cautiously eager … She’s unable to remain still as she lifts green eyed curiosity up to the sky quietly wondering Just what lies over The hill… you capture a moment like no other What a wonderful thing to say!! Thank you!

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Fri 04/04/08 08:41 AM
Warm sun bronzed silk blowing wildly in tune with a faintly sea scented breeze ... Dancing impatiently cautiously eager … She’s unable to remain still as she lifts green eyed curiosity up to the sky quietly wondering Just what lies over The hill… you capture a moment like no other What a wonderful thing to say!! Thank you! your welcome

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Fri 04/04/08 08:51 AM
A fine tanned body of the man to take your hand. Nice thoughts a mist the sandy beach. New sunrise, shadows stright and tall. Still holding back, afraid to fall. Tenderly, slowly, tearing down my wall. Just a passing, end.

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Fri 04/04/08 09:00 AM
A fine tanned body of the man to take your hand. Nice thoughts a mist the sandy beach. New sunrise, shadows stright and tall. Still holding back, afraid to fall. Tenderly, slowly, tearing down my wall. Just a passing, end. And it's lovely. I may use that but if I do, will certainly ask first if that's ok?