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Topic: the goodnight nurse
trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 04:54 PM
no arbitrary thesis with a grin that ceaseless with a face meant to calm wears her smile like a prostheses you can see the folds and the creases caked with powder and balm

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 04/03/08 04:55 PM
You talkin' 'bout me?

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 04:57 PM
You talkin' 'bout me? no no i have a feeling you can make a mighty frown

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 04/03/08 05:01 PM
hiker- trailing- interesting...

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 04/03/08 05:02 PM
hiker- trailing- interesting... By gizmo, You're right! It's fate, I tell ya.

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 05:02 PM
hiker- trailing- interesting... thank you teddy

hikerchick Joined Sat 12/22/07 Posts: 13206	Thu 04/03/08 05:04 PM
In all seriousness, this poem evokes quite a vivid picture.

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 05:06 PM
In all seriousness, this poem evokes quite a vivid picture. i thought so too thanks imagery is everything

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 04/03/08 05:06 PM
I was thinking scarey picture... powder and balm... (shivers)

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 05:10 PM
I was thinking scarey picture... powder and balm... (shivers) i was thinking the nurse from one flew over the cuckoos nest

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Thu 04/03/08 05:19 PM
yes, yes nurse Ratched nice work

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 05:22 PM
yes, yes nurse Ratched nice work ms ratched yes great movie great book im glad u like it

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 04/03/08 05:37 PM
Short, sweet, but very, COMPLETE!! Nive one..

lurchs_sister Joined Mon 10/08/07 Posts: 9433	Thu 04/03/08 05:41 PM
That makes sense now that I've read the posts... Nice write and imagery

iam4u Joined Fri 10/13/06 Posts: 30096	Thu 04/03/08 05:43 PM
Short, sweet, but very, COMPLETE!! Nice one.. Sorry, I REALYY should proof read better.....

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 05:44 PM
Short, sweet, but very, COMPLETE!! Nive one.. thank you its about all i can get out short and sweet

trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 05:45 PM
That makes sense now that I've read the posts... Nice write and imagery thank you im happy you like i dont know if my posts ever make sense to anyone but me but its fun anyway

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