OMG! i had to write a descriptive essay for my senior comp class.... and we had to pick a topic and write about how to tell if its "good" or "bad". My first draft was about music.... but i quickly learned that it was just to vague... so many angles.

So,..... *snicker*.... i wrote about cheese. It is so informative and funny! In my intro i included "So, how does one know if cheese is gouda or bad?"

haha... and then in the conclusion i wrote "Once you learn how to tell good cheese from bad cheese, it’s a bries!"

Im so creative sometimes.

cute...very creative

That was cute....sounds like it was very good!!!

If it's gouda, it's got to be good!! Very witty stuff! Havarti a great day!!

sounds pretty "cheesy"

very cute

you have to post what the teacher thought

Excellent choice of subject matter! Living here in the "Frozen Tundra", Wisconsin's "Packerland", we are known all over the country as "Cheeseheads".

Keep spreadin' the cheese!

that's hilarious

Funny! But creative! and cheese is great by the way.

Funny! But creative! and cheese is great by the way.

Mmmmm everybody likes cheese


...except for those who are lactose intolerant