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Topic: A DREAM THAT FORGOT
sleepin_time Joined Thu 11/01/07 Posts: 354	Wed 04/02/08 05:35 PM
i sleep to much awake to little lost in the woods and all the paths lead back to the middle i follow a dream that forgot about me floated away with the wisp of a breeze now i follow alone in the dark to try and catch the wind but god damn im a marine not traind to think nor to love but i feel the ghost of a feeling passed but not forgotten so i dream that i might catch the dream that forgot about me

James1234567 Joined Sun 01/06/08 Posts: 2589	Wed 04/02/08 05:37 PM


wildsideof35 Joined Sat 08/04/07 Posts: 2189	Wed 04/02/08 05:37 PM


mssilverfox Joined Sat 12/08/07 Posts: 10529	Wed 04/02/08 05:37 PM
very nice

CyPoet Joined Fri 01/11/08 Posts: 12494	Wed 04/02/08 05:51 PM
Good write & very haunting.May U catch that dream that is lost & also eludes U.Godspeed!Cy

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 04/03/08 12:48 PM


trailingahead Joined Thu 03/06/08 Posts: 569	Thu 04/03/08 12:50 PM
very good

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