Hi Houseofblues. I dont usually look at mens profiles, but here goes:
First of all, change your name. I think houseof blues refers to your love of blues music. Is your love of blues music your best quality? Also, the blues can also be interpreted to mean sadness, as in He's feeling blue. Especially since most of your profile is about children and domestic interests. I just dont think houseofblues works well for you.
Next: Delete the last two photos. In the photo of you wearing a knit hat, you are frowning. In fact, you look quite grumpy here. Not Good! The next photo of you in green shirt, you are leaning forward, almost like you have a bad back. Who knows? Maybe you do have a bad back. Anyways, delete that photo as well.
I dont care for the B&W one of you avoiding eye contact either, but if you like it, it is probably OK. Finally, I know you want to show the American flags in your first photo to show your patriotism. Too much. Learn how to crop your photos before posting them.
Lastly, you have lots of great qualities and interests. But we only have so much space to describe ouselves and who we are looking for. Use this space wisely. Just list your top five interests using one word only.
Finally, your profile is too one dimensional. By this I mean most of your profile is about kids. How many, how old, how you adore them, yadi yada. You used up almost all your space talking about kids. Just mention that you have 3 boys, or whatever, and that you love children. Period. Use the rest of your space to be more specific about other facets of your personality, and especially much more specific about the kind of woman you are looking for.
When I read your profile, I felt that you only wanted to hear from single moms. Is this true? If so, state it specifically. Women are not going to respond to confusing, generalized profiles. Best wishes, and please forgive my rather direct personality.

Hi shegoat. Poor profile. Quite poor. (Sorry). First, change your name. Shegoat? Be real!
Almost as bad as having jillass as a name! Next, you are in China, I believe? I dont even see your country of domicle listed. And how can people be friends with you when you live so far away from most English speaking, reading and writing people? Are you mostly looking for friends living in your part of the world, or will you also accept friends via email and chat from far away?
Finally, you are a lovely looking lady, but your photos do not show your natural beauty. I know that for your nationality, you must be discreet in your photos. But you could do a lot better. How about a full length modest photo of you (close up) in a nice gown that shows off your pretty curves? Something like that? Best wishes, hugs

Hi. You seem quite a catch! As for your profile, works for me, but I think it can be improved in several ways: First, for the guys with poor attention spans, you might want to pick 5 words that describe your interests/desires. Put the five words at the top, separated by a comma on the first line by themselvss.
Next: You seem awesome; and I dont mean to critize you here, but you come across as a girl scout. You have lots of very important good qualities; a beautiful woman for sure.
But guys aren't looking for girl scouts. They want to know about your intimacy preferences. Do you have an Alpha personality, or are you a little submissive with the right guy? Could you mention a few things you enjoy in the bedroom? (Let's face it, guys are guys).
Next, I know you are looking for a high quality man and you dont want to attract all the dogs. But if you look at your description of who you are looking for, you will see that you are asking the man to be all of these exceptional qualities such as smart, loving, loyal, understanding, sharing, etc. A lot of guys are going to read that, and think to themselves, geez, I'm a nice guy, but I dont think I can meet all those real high standards. So maybe delete all that, and instead mention that you are looking for a nice, regular guy who uses initiative in meeting others (you get the idea).
Finally, again, I can see that you are a very decent woman who does not want to give the wrong idea. But I think you should try to post a couple of photos that are a little more revealing, and show your sexy side. This can be done tastefully with a little effort, and you dont have to look like a French whore.
Just my thoughts, you are right. A lady like you should be getting a lot more attention from your profile. Best wishes, I know you will find your man. hugs

Good, maybe some pics a little more "revealing"? I'm a guy. How other women view your profile is more important here, I think. Best wishes, you seem sweet and pretty, only problem I see is that you live far away from the big cities, where the people are.

Hi. This is Kev in Massachusetts. I just joined ty. I am looking for woman who knows what she wants and will use initiative to get him. Please look at my profile. I think I need a somewhat sub domestically. I am looking to relocate toward the end of the year, and would love a lady to go to
If you know a woman who might be interested in me, please send her a link. Thank you. Happy Fall to all.
PS: Care to chat? I am kevinbr4 on Yahoo IM. Confidential.