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Thu 05/07/09 11:05 AM
Exoticization

Erotic,hypnotic,foreign,exotic

My hair
my eyes
my lips
my chin

My neck
my chest
my shoulders
my skin

Eyes of lust,veil so thin
you make it clear your bed within
I will be in perfect space
to writhe and romp in carnal sin

Still in heat your senses birth
objectifying my human worth

Chest to breast,lips to chin
stand we close a hair so thin
yet in all your anxious grin
have you yet to look within

From your life you took a flight
landed here in paradise
intentions clear and sharp as knife

You locked your eyes in my direction
and from this day until you please
prey I’ll be of exoticization.

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Wed 05/06/09 04:14 PM

How To Love a Woman



how to love a woman
Is no mystery of scale

how to love a woman
Requires no doctorate from Yale

1st. rule in sequence
Without question wouldn’t fail
Assume NOT to be her owner
to be defined by a male.

2nd. rule in sequence
If you don’t already know
Hands to yourself
deliver NO blow.

If you think you’re doing her a favor feeding her cum
She’s worth more that her parts
nipples,legs,labium.

By now mouths are wide open
as my words get untame
Grow up people
this is no childish game.

3rd. rule in sequence
As you’re now so attuned
Your trust comes before
a request for her pubes to be pruned.

4th. rule in sequence
Now that you’re over the fence
Your balls and your honor
make her fort of defense.

5th. rule in sequence
Now that you’re all ears
nothing romantic about pizza & beers.

6th. rule in sequence
As these words are worth more than a glance
there’s no other foreplay
like music and dance.

7th. rule in sequence
As you’re now sensing the mood
time and space for her passions
so unwise for to brood.

8th. rule in sequence
Yes love is divine
Not all's blessed with the inches
and packing a NINE.
Whatever your package the will you MUST find
with vision and traction
the walls she MUST climb.

9th. rule in sequence
And we are nearing the end
however you do it
keep your eyes off her friend.

10th. rule in sequence
It’s as serious as debt
Compassion;Presence;Wit;Intellect
no matter the order
studied,dissect
These are the VIRTUES
to ensure she stays wet.



LOLlaugh drinker bigsmile rofl That is a seriously written poem JR... I had to read it over a few times....

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Wed 05/06/09 04:04 PM


Jamaican Boy

There was a Jamaican boy
A very strange enchanted boy
They say he wandered very far, very far
Over land and sea
A little shy
And sad of eye
But very wise
Was he

And then one day
A magic day,
an Angel passed his way
And while they spoke of many things, fools and kings

This SHE said to HIM
"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

For all we know we may never meet again
Before you go make this moment FOREVER reign
We won't say "Good night" until the last minute
I'll hold out my hand and my heart will be in it

For all we know this may only be a dream
We come and go like a ripple on a stream
So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know

"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know



Great share Prime....send that angel to kiss the shores of Jamaica... lol... she would LOVE it there.smokin drinks


Hey JR glad you liked the write... lol... I think she would...:banana: drinks


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Wed 05/06/09 10:27 AM

flowerforyou

flowers

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Wed 05/06/09 09:21 AM

The beauty of living life in the moment ... with an Angel :wink: flowerforyou



... u know it Art:wink: flowerforyou

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Wed 05/06/09 09:20 AM

:heart:

:heart:


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Wed 05/06/09 09:19 AM

Whoa.......huh :wink: ohwell smokin

Cool Write.

O.K....That is a cool write too...glasses flowerforyou


glad u liked it... thanks:wink: flowerforyou

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Wed 05/06/09 09:19 AM

laugh flowerforyou

flowerforyou laugh


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Wed 05/06/09 08:37 AM
Edited by 1PrimeUSDABeefcake on Wed 05/06/09 08:49 AM
Jamaican Boy

There was a Jamaican boy
A very strange enchanted boy
They say he wandered very far, very far
Over land and sea
A little shy
And sad of eye
But very wise
Was he

And then one day
A magic day,
an Angel passed his way
And while they spoke of many things, fools and kings

This SHE said to HIM
"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

For all we know we may never meet again
Before you go make this moment FOREVER reign
We won't say "Good night" until the last minute
I'll hold out my hand and my heart will be in it

For all we know this may only be a dream
We come and go like a ripple on a stream
So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know

"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know

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Mon 05/04/09 02:14 AM



SUDANESE CHILD

Sudanese child
Fallen to the ground
Face down
Chest to knees in a
fetal position.
No one feeds you;
no one gives you drink
as you sink further into the dust
underneath an unforgiving sun.

Yet there is one standing
behind you, a vulture of prey,
waiting for your death as you
struggle to breathe your very
last breath.

The cameraman sees you too
waiting for the PERFECT shot,
one that will catapult him into
journalistic fame. He is also
your prey, but no one sees him
there as he buries you with his
artistic inspiration and career
minded aspirations.

Sudanese child
I lifted you up and cradled
you in my arms a thousand
times. Darling, my precious
child, you did not die alone.
My Soul came for you and
lovingly, so lovingly, carried
you Home.

~© JDS 05/03/2009~



... You have drawn a line in the sand Angel that your critics,peers and contemporaries can't cross. Ascension is unpretentious,boastless,selfless and celestially designed ...



I Love you, again and again....no end :heart:


... And I,You... ceaseless & 4-ever...
Exhausting space and oceans of Time. :heart:



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Sun 05/03/09 10:21 PM



Do we really need to hear
about someone else’s
nightmare as long as we
think it doesn’t effect us?
Is speaking about war a
must? I mean, whaat’s the
fuss?! After all, “In God
We Trust” so the mighty
dollar says. I’d rather
talk about religion ‘cause
there’s a lot of sinners
out there not goin’ to
church! You know, not doin’
much about the status quo.


You do seem to be obscessed with war poems. laugh

Not to get into religion, but is that the same God that's totally comfortable with an eternal hell going on forever along-side heaven? huh

In what way would that differ from the wars we have now?

Would there just not be allowed any NEWS coverage of hell in heaven?

Is that it? Out of sight, out of mind?

Don't mind me I'm just curious and I didn't think to rhyme my thoughts I'm too busy drinking soda pop.





The Soul speaks what it must regardless of the way things may seem...The Soul does not concern itself with the possibility of being considered "obsessed"...Perhaps its only purpose is to make known what might otherwise be hidden, or to shine light on the power of Truth and Love...some may view these writes as simply being about war, and others may see something very different if they look in between the lines.

I don't know about your questions but, I do know that, at times, the Soul indeed can be QUITE satirical....winking

These writes need no public approval or societal license. They are what they are....Now, enjoy your soda! I'm currently drinking a Diet cherry Doctor Pepper :laughing:

Cheers drinks




laugh sad laugh bigsmile biggrin :laughing: rofl :thumbsup: winking


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Sun 05/03/09 09:39 PM



SACRIFICIAL LAMB

Love comes and goes
and comes again,
although not always
clearly sent. An
aura, a knowing, a
seeing that retrieves
the resurrection of
God believing,
hope unweaving,
Truth perceiving,
hearts grieving,
or self-deceiving
as defense.

The Soul stretches
to touch, to feel,
to experience what
the mind and body
never will. Perhaps
the sacrificial lamb,
the Soul agrees to
every thing the human
ego is quick to damn.

Still Soul lives
and carries on, yet
not so fond of
letting go. It freely
Loves to release by
communion and in
peace. Devoid of
hate, devoid of weight,
Soul returns to
incarnate as Love
itself, to recreate.

~© JDS 05/02/2009~



... Jamaican Boy ...

There was a Jamaican boy
A very strange enchanted boy
They say he wandered very far, very far
Over land and sea
A little shy
And sad of eye
But very wise
Was he

And then one day
A magic day,
an Angel passed his way
And while they spoke of many things, fools and kings

This SHE said to HIM
"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

For all we know we may never meet again
Before you go make this moment FOREVER reign
We won't say "Good night" until the last minute
I'll hold out my hand and my heart will be in it

For all we know this may only be a dream
We come and go like a ripple on a stream
So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know

"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know






:cry: tears So very beautiful ....:heart: :heart:

:heart: :heart: flowers


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Sun 05/03/09 08:36 PM





I Now Understand

Grief. Relief? Can
someone help me
find peace? My
life ceased when
I leaped,
unleashed into the
horror of war.

I did not understand
deceit, the driving
force for the elite.
So necessary to keep
people poor, and
unaware in their
despair.

I now understand
the powers that be
refuse to ease the
suffering of the
masses. In fact,
pain and confusion
are exacted to
prevent change from
occurring; to keep
blurring the Truth
of what constitutes
evil.

Grief. Relief? Will
someone help me
find peace? Ok,
so you say it's
within? I'd have to
agree 'cause, now
I see things like
I never have before.
Yes I'll return to
war, to fight, yet
my armory will be
my voice exposing
what fuels & ignites
corruption and greed.

~© JDS 05/02/2009~





... a prophetess is reborn ...



I Love you :heart:


... And I,You... :heart:




No, but I Love you more! :laughing: rofl tongue2 winking


...O.K.,one way to settle this...
show me yours and I'll definitely show you mineglasses :banana: pitchfork flowers drool tongue2

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Sun 05/03/09 04:57 PM

SUDANESE CHILD

Sudanese child
Fallen to the ground
Face down
Chest to knees in a
fetal position.
No one feeds you;
no one gives you drink
as you sink further into the dust
underneath an unforgiving sun.

Yet there is one standing
behind you, a vulture of prey,
waiting for your death as you
struggle to breathe your very
last breath.

The cameraman sees you too
waiting for the PERFECT shot,
one that will catapult him into
journalistic fame. He is also
your prey, but no one sees him
there as he buries you with his
artistic inspiration and career
minded aspirations.

Sudanese child
I lifted you up and cradled
you in my arms a thousand
times. Darling, my precious
child, you did not die alone.
My Soul came for you and
lovingly, so lovingly, carried
you Home.

~© JDS 05/03/2009~



... You have drawn a line in the sand Angel that your critics,peers and contemporaries can't cross. Ascension is unpretentious,boastless,selfless and celestially designed ...

no photo
Sun 05/03/09 04:40 PM



I Now Understand

Grief. Relief? Can
someone help me
find peace? My
life ceased when
I leaped,
unleashed into the
horror of war.

I did not understand
deceit, the driving
force for the elite.
So necessary to keep
people poor, and
unaware in their
despair.

I now understand
the powers that be
refuse to ease the
suffering of the
masses. In fact,
pain and confusion
are exacted to
prevent change from
occurring; to keep
blurring the Truth
of what constitutes
evil.

Grief. Relief? Will
someone help me
find peace? Ok,
so you say it's
within? I'd have to
agree 'cause, now
I see things like
I never have before.
Yes I'll return to
war, to fight, yet
my armory will be
my voice exposing
what fuels & ignites
corruption and greed.

~© JDS 05/02/2009~





... a prophetess is reborn ...



I Love you :heart:


... And I,You... :heart:

no photo
Sun 05/03/09 04:28 PM
Edited by 1PrimeUSDABeefcake on Sun 05/03/09 04:32 PM


I Now Understand

Grief. Relief? Can
someone help me
find peace? My
life ceased when
I leaped,
unleashed into the
horror of war.

I did not understand
deceit, the driving
force for the elite.
So necessary to keep
people poor, and
unaware in their
despair.

I now understand
the powers that be
refuse to ease the
suffering of the
masses. In fact,
pain and confusion
are exacted to
prevent change from
occurring; to keep
blurring the Truth
of what constitutes
evil.

Grief. Relief? Will
someone help me
find peace? Ok,
so you say it's
within? I'd have to
agree 'cause, now
I see things like
I never have before.
Yes I'll return to
war, to fight, yet
my armory will be
my voice exposing
what fuels & ignites
corruption and greed.

~© JDS 05/02/2009~





... a prophetess is reborn ...
... the searing voice of the universe made Audible....



no photo
Sun 05/03/09 01:51 PM
Edited by 1PrimeUSDABeefcake on Sun 05/03/09 01:57 PM

SACRIFICIAL LAMB

Love comes and goes
and comes again,
although not always
clearly sent. An
aura, a knowing, a
seeing that retrieves
the resurrection of
God believing,
hope unweaving,
Truth perceiving,
hearts grieving,
or self-deceiving
as defense.

The Soul stretches
to touch, to feel,
to experience what
the mind and body
never will. Perhaps
the sacrificial lamb,
the Soul agrees to
every thing the human
ego is quick to damn.

Still Soul lives
and carries on, yet
not so fond of
letting go. It freely
Loves to release by
communion and in
peace. Devoid of
hate, devoid of weight,
Soul returns to
incarnate as Love
itself, to recreate.

~© JDS 05/02/2009~



... Jamaican Boy ...

There was a Jamaican boy
A very strange enchanted boy
They say he wandered very far, very far
Over land and sea
A little shy
And sad of eye
But very wise
Was he

And then one day
A magic day,
an Angel passed his way
And while they spoke of many things, fools and kings

This SHE said to HIM
"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

For all we know we may never meet again
Before you go make this moment FOREVER reign
We won't say "Good night" until the last minute
I'll hold out my hand and my heart will be in it

For all we know this may only be a dream
We come and go like a ripple on a stream
So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know

"The greatest thing
You'll ever learn
Is just to love
And be loved
In return"

So love me tonight; tomorrow was made for some
Tomorrow may never come for all we know


no photo
Sun 05/03/09 01:03 PM

Why must we destroy to create

The person who thought up this idea no doubt an idiot

Like the saying that to have peace, you must make war

Why can't we live in a society that has people striving together to create things of beauty, instead of things that kill and maim

But if we must destroy to create , then let us destroy hate and create love



... i 2nd the motion ...

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Sun 05/03/09 01:02 PM

I Now Understand

Grief. Relief? Can
someone help me
find peace? My
life ceased when
I leaped,
unleashed into the
horror of war.

I did not understand
deceit, the driving
force for the elite.
So necessary to keep
people poor, and
unaware in their
despair.

I now understand
the powers that be
refuse to ease the
suffering of the
masses. In fact,
pain and confusion
are exacted to
prevent change from
occurring; to keep
blurring the Truth
of what constitutes
evil.

Grief. Relief? Will
someone help me
find peace? Ok,
so you say it's
within? I'd have to
agree 'cause, now
I see things like
I never have before.
Yes I'll return to
war, to fight, yet
my armory will be
my voice exposing
what fuels & ignites
corruption and greed.

~© JDS 05/02/2009~





... a prophetess is reborn ...

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Sun 05/03/09 12:07 AM

very sweet flowerforyou flowerforyou


... thank u....flowerforyou flowerforyou