thats awesome jen...I really enjoyed reading this

Drown in your passion
Escape through your eyes
Flames that define your lips
I want to kiss tonight
Nothing means more to me
Everything about you I love
Breathless I stand before you
Everything I am is simply because
An angels eyes still weakens me
Under broken wings I dream
These are the things words cant explain
You're my neverending need


If love is my fortune,
then I would crawl through a cynical world
If all i feel is love and emotion
I would hunger for the love of you girl



Desperately,i've tried to find you
Every dream designed your face
Falling behind as I run in slow motion
In my minds nocturnal race
Now you're all I adore and cherish
Everything about you i love
If this commitment should ever parish
Ascend me to the skies above


If love is my fortune,
then I would crawl through a cynical world
If all i feel is love and emotion
I would hunger for the love of you girl


I have been lost in these emotions
for too many times
I have dreamt of my bitter devotion
to my lonely nights
I have overcome my weakness
and my suicidal mind
I have accepted those sad regressions
but tonight your love is mine



If love is my fortune,
then I know what beautiful is
Its the glory of our passion
and its the blessing only God can give
Define beauty if you can

I loved it SCG,thank you so much

Cold and lonely shadows
fills me up inside
A dream of my salvation
but the inner me has died
The enemy strikes in silence
blinded are my eyes
Fearless I walk and wonder
what I'm now leaving behind


Ascend above the chaos
there is beauty for all to find
I'm looking ahead to heaven
through the images of my mind



Regression,but its my solution
my resolution,it's my plan
Through darkness I have fallen
but even in weakness I still stand
Theres calmness in the rage now
though i've walked through fire before
I'm ruling with a fist of iron
and I'm pounding through magic doors



Ascend above the chaos
there is beauty for all to find
I'm looking ahead to heaven
through the images of my mind

horses****/By Michael1313


Sun 10/29/06 05:03 PM
You may not believe as much,
I tell you this much is true,
gonna say a thing or two,
of th things I could do for you,
I may not be "John Holmes",
or have a "HORSES" bone,
But I could "DO" you,with my mouth,
Before th GREAT big John,
could even GET his OWN !!!
if you don't like th size,
I have no alibies,only SIGHS
I will not be held blame,
one thing I can tell you,
is I can TRUELY write MY name !!!.............M.

git that offa yo ass.....

The Mirror/By Chubbycherubpoet

Fri 10/27/06 01:20 PM
I stand before the mirror
Trying to see
The angel that is trapped deep inside me
So many say they see he shining out from my eyes
All I see is the sadness that resides

I stand before the mirror
Trying to see
The beauty that is deep within me
So many say it shines from my personality
All I see is the insanity

The mirror cracks
Crumbling to the floor
Shattered by my fist
I can see no more

Blood covered shards
Laying in a discared heap
This is all I see of me

My Desire/BY Sweetcountrygirl

My body is filled with an all consuming fire
I yearn to feel your touch
I encourage the desire
Oh so much
Thoughts of you resuming your life without me
fill me with rage and jealousy
you are not destined to be alone,
we are one
come and take my hand
your heart I will clutch onto
I will not crush you
I'll not leave you in the mulch and mire
I wont tear you as the barbed wire
I may not have the courage to say "I Love You",
so listen closely to what I tell you
through these words of poetry
my heart is bare for all to see
a glimpse into our destiny
I am filled with desire
come and fan the flames burning higher
higher than I've ever dreamed
need for you tears through me
I am torn inside out

Summer Fled by Will

Tue 10/03/06 01:02 PM
Summer fled before my footsteps
Like night from coming dawn
Her hair trailed out behind her
As autumns baleful song
Winter fell as rustling leaves
In the darkest woods
Covering all of natures needs
Like a lover should
By spring my steps grew heavy
My feet turned red with rust
I was shackled to the memory
Of what became of us
Cold time it ticked and
Time it tocked as
Heaven passed us by
Still when I'm in the present TENSE
I stop and wonder why
See the book blow in the wind and
Try to mark the turniing page
As seasons change with all contempt
While I am still locked in this cage
All these thing ran through my head
I tried to give chase
But Summer Fled... WILL

Thanks and god bless Morena

This could be the night
I've been waiting for
I'm looking dead in your eyes
and just knowing i'm yours
you got me where you want me
Im where i want to be
tonight all the world will vanish
because you're everything i need

you are the warmth i seek in winter
you are the springtimes gentle breeze
the summer nights where lovers will fall
down on bended knee
You are the magic once believed in
but now I believe again
My perfect view of paradise,my angel
my greatest friend



Your eyes speaks the words that moves me
more than a voice could ever do
and body language has never seduced me
but oh the way you move
This one night of romance is ours
and I'm taking you fast into my arms
I'm gonna lay it on the line,I want to love you
tonight you belong to my heart


you are the warmth i seek in winter
you are the springtimes gentle breeze
the summer nights where lovers will fall
down on bended knee
You are the magic once believed in
but now I believe again
My perfect view of paradise,my angel
my greatest friend


Ok before rumours fly..no i'm not..pick one

1.jealous
2.disrespecting will
3.trying to get Wanda back
4.in love with someone at justsayhi
5.into jello


yes I am

1.a man who loves to write
2.often makes no sence
3.thinks russian accents are sexy
4.still trying to figure out women
5.blue in the face

if you're talking about the please verify your email address thats above
your profile.You've gotta go to your email inbox and click..not spam or
not junk/I'm talking about your email inbox not the inbox where you
recieve your justsayhi mail/The justsayhi team probably sent you a
verification request and it wound up in your junk mail..you can easily
move that to your inbox by clicking the not spam or not junk on your
yahoo or msn or whatever you go through page

oops wrong post/sorry

When I fall from angels wings
and I'm released to the darkness
I'm waiting for it to rain again
and this need has me now obsessed
Wash away the memories
because I don't want to think anymore
Drown me in the tears of heaven
pull me through those magic doors

Take me now I'm broken and i'm torn all apart
My mind hurts from dreaming,and I hold this broken heart
Cleanse me of my sins,for I beg forgiveness this tme
Theres a hole in the skies of paradise from where I've descended
tonight



I can't believe how much i lied
and i know just what that means
for a world i swore to take to flight
with blood on my wings
A voice without reason,my words are disolved in time
My face is a dorian gray which never reflects your mind

Oh I could so taggggggggggg to this one Wanda/but I'll leave that to my
brother of metal (step up Will)

lol/good one..just figuring that out

I realy liked this one SCG.I don't know how else to put it..but Will
should really consider putting this to music

My heart has broken me to tears
on these nights that i spend alone
I'm reaching out to find theres no one here
this empty house was once my home
All the pictures have been taken down
even though I still feel you here
Its quiet enough now to search my soul
and to make this somewhat more clear
If God takes you away from me,
then I know you'd be the angel of my life
but I didnt lose you to god,
so i want you here tonight
You are walking the earth with a new lover
to whom I dont measure up
I lost you to the odds this time,i lost you to love
So casual was your way in demanding I let go
but how am I to change these feelings,
when you're all the emotion I know
My dreams will never change,because there you'll remain
as much as i need you now,you will never know
I just want to feel those endless kisses
and to dream into your eyes again
I want to hear you say you love me
and if the gods of passion could wash away these sins
I want the intamacy and the bedroom eyes
I want to share these times with you
I want to hold you in these arms forever,I swear
this much is true
but now I have come to realize,as the answers ascend above
I lost you to the odds this time,I lost you to love

Hey guys,

I'm just dropping a quick line to all of you to say Happy New
Year (2007)/One of the best things that happened in 2006 was joining
this community website/I have made some amazing friends here and I wish
for all of us the best in the new year/My manager took the advantage of
me being the single non drinker non partier of the company..so I gotta
go hold the fort down at work..peace,love,kisses and hugs

JT

Good work SCG/keep it real

Ontario,whether you think i'm a crappy writer or not..You're a crappy
critic,and not even a real one.You don't get paid for it,so its
obviously not your profession..and besides do you honestly think I give
a **** about what you think of me or my work...I have been writing songs
and poems since I was 13 years old..I've worked with several ny
musicians and I play guitar at a teachers level..I do not need to go to
some bull**** website to learn how to become the kind of writer that you
approve of.I'm really getting fed up with you being such a hardass
towards me..I am a writer god damn it..whether you like it or not..so
get real...and dont read my posts,that really shouldnt be a problem for
you

JT